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he planted the seedling
but did not stay
to watch its silent,
tender growth

underneath the moist, cool earth
spread vein-like roots
and up above
surfaced the tiniest pale blooms

harmful they became
in such a short time
growing
into unmanageable wild vines

crawling speedily,
snatching,
clinging at my heart
and never letting go
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part one

i'd like your honest opinion please :floating:

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:icontoaakatsuki:
part one? does that imply a part two? :P

i'm quite intruiged. that's some nice imagery.

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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconangelwings-goldhalo:
:dance:
YAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yep, there will be at least 3 parts :D
thank you :heart:
:icontoaakatsuki:
awesome. can't wait for the other two. :)

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconfathertiresias:
My honest opinion is that this is an awesome idea and if the next two parts are as good as this I can't wait to see them :D

--
'Beauty is truth, truth beauty, — that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.'

*The-Literati
~ShortStackStories
:iconangelwings-goldhalo:
:aww:
Am struggling to start part 2.
Trying to think of how it will go.
I should have it posted in a few days tho :floating:
:iconangelwings-goldhalo:
Thanks so much! I hope they're as great as the first one too!
:icontoaakatsuki:
Alright! :)

--
The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
:iconcatieisavampire159:
this is mildly creepy but awesome.

i really love it.
it's not your normal style but it works.
the word choice is fantastic and i'm really enthralled.
i'll be waiting for the next two parts!

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i hope you see me smile.
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:iconangelwings-goldhalo:
Mildly creepy??
How??

Thank you for loving it and for the fave :glomp:

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