he planted the seedling
but did not stay
to watch its silent,
tender growth
underneath the moist, cool earth
spread vein-like roots
and up above
surfaced the tiniest pale blooms
harmful they became
in such a short time
growing
into unmanageable wild vines
crawling speedily,
snatching,
clinging at my heart
and never letting go















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i'm quite intruiged. that's some nice imagery.
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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi
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YAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yep, there will be at least 3 parts
thank you
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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi
~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
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'Beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.'
*The-Literati
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Am struggling to start part 2.
Trying to think of how it will go.
I should have it posted in a few days tho
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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi
~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
=RawEm0tion
i really love it.
it's not your normal style but it works.
the word choice is fantastic and i'm really enthralled.
i'll be waiting for the next two parts!
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i hope you see me smile.
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