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soft brown tufts fell
from the hairbrush
onto her lap
bald patches on the back
of her small, child-like skull
gave us each one of her curls

sleeping for entire days.
blue spider webs for veins.
only in her dreams did she survive.

green dulled eyes
looked into a mirror,
then looked into our eyes,
they couldn't find
her own reflection

in a sterilized, vomit yellow room,
hooked onto strange beeping machines,
she let us go
no more our lovely angel
God's angel now
:iconangelwings-goldhalo:

Author's Comments

someone dear lost to cancer.
tisn't directly about her.
miss my aunt.
October 4th, 2006

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:icontoaakatsuki:
oh my. such powerful imagery.

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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

~ShortStackStories
~Amaranth-Portal
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:iconangelwings-goldhalo:
Thank you :D I struggled with this one for two days. Glad you liked it :aww:
:iconcatieisavampire159:
that is so sad.
but i love how it's so real.
the poem is great.

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:iconcatieisavampire159:
welcome!

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:iconloopy-lexy:
this is so beautiful =(

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you are my sweetest downfall
i loved you first

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