i.
ten years old
first time
shedding blood
ii.
tears ingrained
within the rocks
of your eyes
iii.
hold you
in the cradle
of my chest
iv.
will you leave
when my lips
begin to quiver?
v.
the childhood name
she hated
she kept
vi.
these little answers
tiny
killers
vii.
sharp reality
chlorine
in the nose
viii.
moonchild
of midnight
conceived at dawn
ix.
baby brother
holds wild berry skittles line
x.
curious case
car guts
in the back seat
xi.
milk and chocolate patches
young deer
passing
xii.
strike mother strike
tonight
i won't be home
xiii.
wailing child
won't you stop
that shrieking?
xiv.
closed eyes
go down
the open road
xv.
drove silently today
pink sunset lighting my way
xvi.
away into the night
right under your skin
xvii.
gone...old love letters
sweet midnight serenades
xvii.
persistent ant
crawling over scratched words
xix.
dandelion puffs
teased by sensual winds
fly loose to air
xx.
unbelieve
lies repeated
as truth
xxi.
too much silence
cut
by quiet blade
xxii.
brown on yellow on pink
petal of a rose
xxiii.
roadkill taste
lingers
on parched tongue
xxiv.
fucking little buggers
gleefully bite legs
xxv.
pulsing heat
beneath swollen wrist
xxvi.
five a.m.
droplets sliding
cold and ready
xxvii.
seal your lips babe
don't ruin it
xxviii.
crescent moon shadows
pull down
heavy weight
xxix.
rays spray lashes,
eyelids,
darkness in pupils
xxx.
blinking seconds
flutter
on each face
xxxi.
messy bun--
tousled midnight hair
of a genius













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I especially like iv. v and vii are really good too.
hmm, it's hard to critique haiku. xD there's so little to consider that to me it's almost all about impact.
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i hope you see me smile.
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Did they impact?
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||+i want to be the one to walk in the sun+||
And I have to thank you for telling me about this haikuthon. I've been so unproductive lately - this gives me something to do.
The cool thing about haiku is that even if they're not a lot of work, they do require quite a bit of thought.
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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi
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